Thanks for the feedback! I wanted #10 to feel a little off-kilter, so that when Lane and Joan finally figured it out, you could feel his world trying to right itself as a result. But I get that it could feel rushed. I was definitely anxious for them to get together, haha. :)
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Date: May 1st, 2012 07:01 pm (UTC)