Thank you so much for commenting! I did think about ending the piece on a messier, less-happy note, but by god, by the end of it all I just wanted those two kids to have a bit of happiness.
Still not decided on whether I'll write a companion piece, but I will definitely try my hand at Joan's POV very soon. Her voice is much more difficult for me to get right than Lane's. :)
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Date: May 1st, 2012 07:06 pm (UTC)Thank you so much for commenting! I did think about ending the piece on a messier, less-happy note, but by god, by the end of it all I just wanted those two kids to have a bit of happiness.
Still not decided on whether I'll write a companion piece, but I will definitely try my hand at Joan's POV very soon. Her voice is much more difficult for me to get right than Lane's. :)