TBH, I'm not normally much of a Lane fan (although I do like his current storyline), but I thought the voice here was very well-done. It really sounds like Lane, without being too "Look, I'm writing as a British guy!" if you know what I mean. In fact, I thought the minor characters were really well-written too--even Harry's one line sounded like him.
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Date: May 30th, 2012 09:29 pm (UTC)